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     What if throughout your teenage life you had a job, you went home and you did nothing. Would you like that? A judge in New Zealand believes that is what teens should be doing instead of enjoying their youth. I'm writing this essay because I disagree with the judge in New Zealand. I believe that cities should provide a recreational facility. 
     One reason why the judge's statement is bad is if you want to motivate teenagers to get a job or visit sick people you don't call them cry babies. For example if you want someone to lose weight you don't tell them they are fat and need to lose weight. That kind of motivation just leads to the person becoming more insecure and they start to lose self esteem. The right way to motivate someone is to encourage and support them and tell them they can do it.
      If someone does listen to what the judge said and goes straight home after school and doesn't interact with anyone, chances are they will become socially awkward. A person who goes straight home and doesn't talk to anyone because they are busy mowing the lawn or studying. The person will have a hard time interacting. They won't know how to communicate with others and will always feel left out.
      While you're young you want to have the most fun possible because once you're an adult you can't have fun. You can't have fun because you have responsibilities. For example, someone who is married, has kids and an important job won't go out partying. So when you're a teenager it's important to have the most fun possible.
       In conclusion I suggest that the judge capitulate and work with politicians to form a recreational facility for kids of all ages. This will mean that kids will stay out of trouble. The kids can develop their social skills. It's also a great way to have fun because the fun years of anyone's life is always limited.


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